Hey Jordan! Nice piece. Something to ponder on for me. Have you done that with your blogging in some ways?

You are the pro, but I heard your interview with Zulie and wanted to provide some minor feedback:

- Your paragraphs are a little long. Could help to keep them slightly shorter to keep the reader moving.

- Pull quotes might be something to consider to emphasize certain things you believe the reader should pay attention to.

- I have read a few of your posts. You always tell a great story (I need to work on this), but your opening lines feel like they could use a little more "bounce" or excitement. For this one, what if you started this post with, "Imagine training to crawl NYC marathon. Not run, crawl!"

Once again, I have less than 500 followers, you have nearly 8K, but I wanted to sincerely be helpful. Best of luck!